Comments : A Broken Heart That The World Forgot

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Wow!!Excellent job for this.The title itself caught me!!The rhyming was great.And I love the last stanza, Very strong!!Well done again.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    "Outwards she appears happy, inside she's full of broken dreams
    She doesn't know what to do, tears falling so salty and hot
    She's just another broken heart, that the world forgot"

    ^That ending really made the whole poem beutiful to me. There's so many deep emotions flowing around in this poem and I could feel them while reading on. A breath taking piece.
    Jennie, you have some talent girl. =] keep up the great work!
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    That was ahmazing
    your such a great writer!