Comments : X~X Sure Things X~x

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Beautiful writing and Excellent Form.. And Good Flow.. My goodness its just Great!

    5.5**
    <33

    And Thank You For Your Comment =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Beautiful write!!!
    Keep up the good work.5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    =) loved it!!!
    love the way you draw out a simple statement "nothing stays the same" to be so interesting and detailed.... its amazing to read it really pulled me in!!

    well done!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Of all the things in life
    which are to many to name.
    One thing to count on
    is nothing stays the same.

    ^how very true. this poem has a great message behind it. i love your description..and even though it's simple and short it gets that point across.
    great work! =] keep it up.
    --Viola

    p.s. thanks for the comment on my poem! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Beautiful poem..i love the expressions

  • 16 years ago

    by l0ser

    I agree.
    have you ever tried free verse?

  • 15 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this

  • 15 years ago

    by real eyes realize real lies

    Wow i loved it your a awsome writer!!

    XoXo~Jessica~oXoX

  • 15 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it!!
    5/5