Hey thats really good and a lot of really powerful words. well done xx

Im Crying! 0.0

That was so sad and filled with heartfelt emotion. The flow was amazing, the peice just.... Breathtaking!
It suck's when we make mistakes that hurt ourselves. Like lose the love of you life, trying to figure out if they are...

Truly Amazing!
I loved it, and it deservesa 5/5 for sure...
Keep it up,
Elaine.

Thats the situation im n now..i love this!! 5/5

That is such a touching poem
its so deep
5/5
i wish i cud give more

loved it
pls read murder or suicide in my poems
im sure you'll love it

tc
love
amy

O my gosh!!!! i loved it so much! it was a perfect ending...I Really liked it alot...great job

Its a great poem....one of few that are straight from the heart! great job!
-amanda-

My god so emotional! this one is really great i loved it! where did u get ur insperation?

Awesome poem
i loved this piece
really sad poem too

thanks for writing it

love
amy