I liked this one.. lol I also like how your from New Zealand.. I live in Canada right now.. but I have lived in New Zealand before.. it's a really neat palce I love it.. :) That poem was really great though... you can check out some of my stuff it you want :) The names Andy.

This poem is really cool i liked it i can relate to this big time great job :)

Love this poem :) who where really able to write down the feelings without making them sound stupid, its deep and i love it!
keep writing!
dani

Very good poem i liked it...peace

Wow this poem had some real power.as i was reading it felt as if the words were reaching out for me.5/5 great poem.

Cory

This poem is deep i had 2 read it twice i like it 5/5*

Great poem.....i really love it....very well written....awesome job...
~*~Cindy~*~

This poem is really really good brilliant i can also relate to it as well it makes me so sad to read or write poems like this but its the only way i know how to let my feelings out
any ways keep writing cause your poems really are brilliant

This is really deep and open.
Its really well written.
I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to this poem, including me, and thats what makes it brilliant in my books.

Well written, 5/5 as always!

This poem was well though out and I really enjoyed reading it. =] It was structured wonderfully and had the perfect flow to it. It was also compacted with emotions and as I read it I heard a voice(your voice) reading the poem. It was outstanding! Great work!

Now i like this one even more!
its very sad but you really show how you felt. i like the technique you used of repetition, it hit harder and bolder but kept it flowing... if that makes sense which it probably doesnt.
anyway-awesome work.
what you don't realise is that to write about this showsthat you aren't as weak as you think. i think you are a stronger person than you think!
keep writing, it helps!
xxx

If only I could accepted its human to feel,
If only I diddon'tt need the wall.

It was going great til here.

An AMAZING POEM!!
It's very very good.

Very nice, poem is depressing and filled up with lots of dobt, not that that's a good thing but it's always good to write it out,

Deffinateally can see the deep meaning in it,

nice work,

So sad and beautiful....I know someone just like this....it gave me insight to who they really are