Sleepy Meadows

by Richard Machado   Sep 10, 2007


Cool winds caress my skin;
And, the smell of grass and water spins
My head until I whimper down
Into the soft serenading ground.

So, as the sleepy meadow sings,
With its soft and brilliant wings,
Of its moon-lit blades and petals
May its nectar coalesce its fettles.

And, of the silver waves, a roaring,
Bring the moisture to me; soaring.
And, in this silent nightly meeting,
The winds will give me their last greeting.

The conscious world is now fleeting,
And all the meadow is now sleeping.
I dream of rising with the sun;
And, me, to be, with the meadow; one.

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  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    The rhyming is brilliant.
    the poem over all is amazing as well.
    keep it up.
    you have talent.
    <3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Vocabulary is wonderful and its quite descriptive. Is there a hidden meaning in this? Because if there if, I'm not smart enough to figure it out, LOL. Anyway, great job, and I have to mention i LOVE the second stanza.
    Keep it up!
    5/5
    ~Lainey

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Very descriptive and great use of words! I really enjoyed reading this..Excellent Poem!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by darkenlight1

    Awesome poem. nice flow

  • 16 years ago

    by turtle

    "The conscious world is now fleeting,
    And all the meadow is now sleeping.
    I dream of rising with the sun;
    And, me, to be, with the meadow; one. "

    Simply wonderful!.... your vocabulary was great and the flow was just great!...

    these are the type of poems that i like.The ones where i can really feel the emotion.

    gratz on the job well done!

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