This was indeed an unique poem, and was very pretty; but, I had a hard time trying to understand every line of it so I could get a complete picture of the poem and picture it in my head. I think I had a hard time because of the broken english; but, besides all that, I thought this was quite pretty and showed to me some deep emotions which I appreciate. I loved the second stanza, and the last line of the poem because it changes the whole mood, effectively, and helps me get into the poems meaning a bit more. You are a good writer, so don't quit.
Beautifully written friendship poem, I like it from the beginning to the end. Truly great collab, all stanzas are equally good. I like the choice of words and the rhymes are not too typical which is excellent.
Whole message and the topic of the piece are very positive.
5/5 from me