Laura. we done here great job.
and i know that we realy struggled for it. hope to write with you more collab.

take care
laura

Really amazing write.
U both did a great job.
5/5

Keep up the good work

God bless u

This was a very heart warming poem , I loved it ,well written and wording was great , super job , keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Very nice collab i love collab poems and this one was good could you plz read my new poem Puzzle of the mind. 5/5

I think that it is really cute. i like the whole theme. i think that the words that you used really "made" the poem

keep it up

Really well done..I couldnt even really tell it was a collab..which is really good..sometimes you can tell and it doesnt make the poem as good. Good flow to this one and I enjoyed the metaphors and the emotions for these to linked souls. Great right and keep it up you two!

Beautifully written friendship poem, I like it from the beginning to the end. Truly great collab, all stanzas are equally good. I like the choice of words and the rhymes are not too typical which is excellent.
Whole message and the topic of the piece are very positive.
5/5 from me

This was indeed an unique poem, and was very pretty; but, I had a hard time trying to understand every line of it so I could get a complete picture of the poem and picture it in my head. I think I had a hard time because of the broken english; but, besides all that, I thought this was quite pretty and showed to me some deep emotions which I appreciate. I loved the second stanza, and the last line of the poem because it changes the whole mood, effectively, and helps me get into the poems meaning a bit more. You are a good writer, so don't quit.

Take care, Tricky tricky! =]

~Richieee

Well done. I think you both did an amazing job with this collab. Great job.

Cicely

Excellent!

i love the concept of it, the start up to the end it fits right its topic. it flowed nicely!

keep it up!

Two arms to cry on, one heart to share;
All I have for you, nothing as plurality.
Love that. Great work again Laura. It really captures things from the heart and excellent word usage. Keep writing

cheers, josh