OMG, i love this poem! you really have a talent, i would love to read more of your work keep it up!

This is a very worrying poem....
If what you describe here is really how you are feeling, then please contact me hun. I know life can push you to the brink of not knowing what your next move will be, but know this...."There is always someone out there who cares" it may be your closest friend or a complete stranger. Dont ever give up, dont ever believe that you are alone, no matter how lonely you may feel....i have been there myself. As for the poem, great work, fantastic description of emotion that stands boldly from within the words. Great work.

O please dont do anything you mentioned in this poem, there are poeple who care, me! i may not know you but i do more than you know, i've been there, done that its not worth it please trust me. i'm going through hell myself but i wont do that because i have a baby in my tummy rite now and not only would i be taking my own life, but my baby girls too. if you need some one to talk to, you can talk to me.

Wow thats sounds like my mom... i don't know if that poems about you, but thanks for writing it i needed to know im not alone... thank you so much. 5/5