Die Another Day: insert (sound effect)

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Sep 12, 2007


Intoxication wearing off,
Assume that you're alone,
Your chest is heaving, (heavy cough,)
A dark, disturbing tone.

Poison seeps into your veins,
(Involuntary breath,)
Silver needled named Disdain,
Segmented laws of death.

There's a numbness in your arm,
Thoughts racing in your head,
(Suspenseful music,) sadist's charm,
Drown your heart in dread.

(Gunshots) echo through the night,
Flames descend to blackness,
You feel the chains, the urge to fight,
Have courage... no, you lack this.

Murder has been set in motion,
Your gut begins to churn,
Crushed beneath the endless notion
That (poof) you won't return.

Death decides its final path,
Fate has picked its course,
(Tick tock, tick tock,) time's sweet wrath,
But is your will a stronger force?

Your heart decides it shall not die,
It (pump-pump, pump-pump's) away,
Your voice yells out a proud defy,
"I'll die another day!"

Escape seems pure and easy,
Its simple, said and done,
You break free, your gut still queasy,
You (sigh) and start to run.

Midnight chimes throughout the den,
Death comes another way,
A blade, your throat, you (gasp) and then...
You've died another day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blacksand

    Nice work. Another work of art. You should be proud of yourself for the great work you and putting out. Keep it up.
    Blacksand

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    You turned a terrible song into an amazing poem haha, great work on this

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh deary. Wow. :P
    This was flat-out amazing. It was so dark & haunted. Just amazing. The flow was flawless & your word choices were perfect.

    "There's a numbness in your arm,
    Thoughts racing in your head,
    (Suspenseful music,) sadist's charm, <<<--- I love that line. <3
    Drown your heart in dread."

    ^ Simply marvelous, doll. :) Keep writing. 5.5

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxVampxXx

    Wow awesome work

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