Comments : Die Another Day: insert (sound effect)

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxVampxXx

    Wow awesome work

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh deary. Wow. :P
    This was flat-out amazing. It was so dark & haunted. Just amazing. The flow was flawless & your word choices were perfect.

    "There's a numbness in your arm,
    Thoughts racing in your head,
    (Suspenseful music,) sadist's charm, <<<--- I love that line. <3
    Drown your heart in dread."

    ^ Simply marvelous, doll. :) Keep writing. 5.5

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    You turned a terrible song into an amazing poem haha, great work on this

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by Blacksand

    Nice work. Another work of art. You should be proud of yourself for the great work you and putting out. Keep it up.
    Blacksand