Ahh what a beautiful poem. Seriously. Very cute and your imagenery is amazing! I really love this poem, so romantic also. The way you were descripting everything made it deep, and I felt a bit sad tone to it, lovers that can't be together. Brilliant!
Keep writing! 5/5

Oh wow. The opening line really grab my attention. It's one of the best 1st line I have ever read. It really painted a picture in my mind, good job.

Thanks for the comment.

This poem is great. It gave me a vision of that moment. Just be honest I wish that kind of poem could be written for me.
C.J.