Comments : Army poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i can hear gun shot, i can hear hearts pounding..
    i totally feel the thoughts you've written..be proud!

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautifully Disfigured

    Basic training in ft.leonardwood missouri. thats where david is... im not sure about friends but yeah.... you did really good on this one.... if only everybody would remember those who fight for us...

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissaa xox

    Omg his poem was rly touching.. i know i dont live in the states but are troops r fighting also, and all troops deserve respect for what they go through but no one shows it

    awesome poem loved it