Read between the lines

by trixibelle   Sep 13, 2007


Does the sea reflect off the sky?
My eyes are blue
My hands are sticky
But i love kiwifruit
Summer is my favorite season
My favorite color is orange
I have a lot of friends
No one understands me
Do you?
Do you understand this poem?
It would be harder to make a rock cry than bleed
yes, i do wear my heart on my sleeve
Is it obvious?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    I like it. It seems like one of those school inspired poems though, where you're assigned something to write for each line. The end picks up a bit, I like the rhetorical questions, and you do darken it down quite successfully.

  • 16 years ago

    by trixibelle

    No your insane if you do

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Do i get low points for barely understanding it? good job

    your servant:
    david

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