Comments : My Hero

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Wonderfully written. This is such sad write but very sweet and touching. I don't know what you're feeling but I can only imagine how hard it is to lose a dad and I want you to know that if ever you need to talk, just PM and I'll be there for you. 5/5

    Take Care && Thanks for your comment.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Ken

    Great poem keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Lucifer

    I can totally relate to this. My dad died last January. My poems On Angel's Wings is similar if you want to check it out.

  • 16 years ago

    by stephanie

    Thats deep! i like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by i less then 3 you

    Wow great poem....
    man sorry 4 ur loss 2...
    it must sux...

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. im sorry about your dad. :[[
    but this is a really sweet poem. :]]
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveBird99

    Great poem. so sorry about you dad

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow this was really great, keep it up,
    i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
    I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
    Polaroid
    p.s GREAT JOB

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Wow! this is great x 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    My father was my first best hero, just like yours. I like what you said to yours. You got the message across, that's why you got the 5.