Beautiful free verse penned you portrait here... as a rejoice in life for its own sake. Life is no brief candle, It is a sort of splendid torch, The being a force of nature....Awesome! keep them coming, you've a gift for it that you never know. take care.

Excellent poem. Wonderfully written. I hope this isn't the first poem you've written :p 'cause if it is you are truly amazing. The imagery you used was perfect. This poem flowed so well and you expressed your emotions beautifully. 5/5

Take Care Shauna!

-Shannon <3

Great poem

Wowie I think this is soooo beautifully written
and am deeply impressed and will surely continue reading your poems. It is deffinately a one of kind. very good and keep up the good work

The imagery in this poem is just brilliant. The great flow and well expressed emotion made this yet, another beautiful piece. Can't wait to read more of your work. 5/5

marcella

Wonderful poem , twisted a little , but well written and choice of words , was simply great , your talent is excellent , I loved this one , it was great , and a pleasure to read, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

Your description of the setting really makes the poem interesting and makes you mentally visualize what you are writing! Great job! and by the way thank you for commenting me on my poem. I cant wait to see what other poems you have =)

Wow. I started to read it, and found it was a little lengthy. However, I HAD to read on! It captivated me! I love it!

WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!!! so beautifully written! Glorious imagery! read it three times! LOVED the lines:
The sky no longer weeps.
The colors are found and aligned

So descriptive! you have a unique style, that it is easy to read and captivating! The vocab you use is flawlessly chosen and obviously well thought out!
I'm VERY impressed! this one's going straight to my favorites.

Damn nice!