Comments : September

  • 16 years ago

    by krystal

    Amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    September will come around every year.. Nothing will stop that happening.. but who you choose to let support you is what's important.. You can't be weak when it comes to love. Love is so strong, that it gives you hope, and promise, and a future to work towards. If you lie about it, you are only lying about that person, and that can't be what love is.. Maybe you should stop looking for reasons why you can't be honest, and start looking at how soon you can set the record straight. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    More importantly, your poem is beautiful, and really well written. You have put so much of your pain in it, and your dad would be proud of the way you spoke of him. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by e darby

    Wow you really love her dont you-dont let her get away -you sound two very special people thast should be together and the whole world should know about it-scream it from the rooftops-take care always x

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    What a beautifully written, heartfelt poem. It made me cry - that life can be so cruel. But we have to rise above it all. Your Dad might not be here anymore, but he is still watching, always nearby and knows everything you say and do. How would he feel about you not being honest with the woman you love? How would he have helped you now? If you love her that much you must take the opportunity now. Give yourself a chance to find even more to celebrate in September - the anniversry that you finally made things right with her, and your daughter.
    Good luck - and well done
    K xx

  • 16 years ago

    by prettygal

    Just BE WITH HER THEN!!!!!!!!!!! x