Oh my god this poem was so sad. I liked how you took such a small image but made it so powerful. The reader was able to see the sadness but also confusion of the little girl as she sat at the tombstone. And that's something that a lot of poems miss. For when someone dies little children aren't able to understand whats happened but in this poem you showed the confusion and the sadness. I also liked how you made the child's lines short and simple while the descriptive lines were more complex. The only critism I have is I would add some punctuation at the end of the lines. Over all nice work.