Wow..very powerful!! Amazing writing.. the emotion and feelings are so real.. and thats important to read in a poem b/c they're are so many fakes. Great Poem!

5.5**
<33

This poem is very deep and that's what I like most about it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, so that makes this even more poem excellent! It also flowed really nicely. Please keep on writing, you have talent! 5/5

~Kristina

Very powerful piece of poetry and I love the concept. The emotions are well expressed as well. Flow was nice too.
5/5

marcella

Wow very deep i loved it miz.5/5

Cory

Wow. very nice poem. i loved it. u do have a talent, really. keep up da good work!

That was amazazing i really enjoyed it!!!

xoxTaylor