First of all Haiku must be poem about nature this type of poetry has some other name, I think form is right but it isn't about nature. I think that it is called something like Senry or something similar.
And now about your poem, wow, wow , wow. You don't have idea how much you improve your writing, this short piece is simply amazing. Fantastic work, you said so much with so little words!

I concur it was great 4 so little words. good job!!5/5

Brilliant!

5.5**
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This is an outstanding Senryu reflecting an astronomical passion WELL WRITTEN

Short, sweet and to the point. Formed poetry is usually hard for it has restrictions, however; you did this effortlessly, the flow was good.

Peace, Joe