Comments : Those thoughts i cannot ignore

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenMe19

    This One Is VERY Good!..Very Good Writer Aswell

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    This poem flowed really nicely. It all fitted together perfect. Loved it. Pretty keen on you too :P lol. Glad you joined up. xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    This is goood
    you write well

    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Fay

    Hey, this poem is great, good word choice, but i think u could have extended it, it was abit too short, neways read mine and let know wat u think, good job ;).

    Luv Fay :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really like how you wrote this...the words are good they flowed really well together...very good...if you could or would like please check sum of my new ones out...agian great job...keep it up! =)

    BabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I loved your choice of words and the flow...nice write!

    Brooke<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    AMAZING!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Great poem. my brother jimmy is in bagdad. its hard on all of us and i hope you get through it. great job.

    mandy xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I like it alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Alison

    I really like this one as well. :] its great. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by willowoman

    WHOLE COW THIS IS A GREAT POEM KEEP IT UP

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow i love it your so great of a writer

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Like the emotion put into the poem, 5/5. Em x