Endless Sparkle [Haiku]

by Tricky Daze   Sep 15, 2007


Stars compete at sky
to dance with fabulous moon
all night, all day long

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  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    I like nature poems. And I liked this one too. Well written.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Mhhh, I love Haiku's:)
    Beautiful write and a lovely subject.

    take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I havnt read a haiku, or a nature poem in a while. Youve made me realise what i love about them. *smiles*.
    I think that you have so much meaning in this. Haiku's are meant to hold strong meanings but its soemtimes hard to see.
    Good usage of discription - it created excellent imagery.
    An amazing read - sorry for the short ocmment but i do not know what else to say. Keep writing! :)
    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    It is really a gift when you are able to express yourself with very few words. You can.
    Great job!

    5/5 for you sweetie

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    You're right about Haiku's. Those three lines always manage to say so much
    This one created such fabulous imagery for me!
    It was perfect
    5.5
    *Gem*