I like how you wrote both forms back
to back as one speaks of the present
the other is in the past and the two
combined together make for a great
read.
Excellent work no doubt Write On,
Bogie

I don't really prefer funny poems, some people love to read piece like this, but this really isn't my favorite type of poetry. Sorry, this is jusy my opinion, but I don't like it.

Good poem, very interesting and greatly written. I like the first piece more, it has good choice of words. Very unique poems.
Keep up!

Haha i love that last line! i found both of these to be original and unique in concept, and i enjoyed both the flow and wording. the last line, i didn't see coming, but it sure made of giggle!

Lol! Those both made me smile!

This is a good poem and it is true babe, keep writing cause you have talent.
Tara

That was funny.... im bored in school and that made me laugh.... read and rate/comment on mines.... thnks

Corrine...VERY IMPRESSED!!

Limerick - I have tried myslef to write one of these but have yet to succeed. You did a great job. Syllables were great and the flow was strong. The rhymes were original and i truly enjoyed the read

Your limerick was incredible, but then I read the poem..lol. Here is hoping i never have to attend my daughters` prom..lord have mercy!..lmao fantastic work. Timothy r

Absolutely loved the poem! Made me laugh, thanks.