That was...
Beautiful.
Yes, beautiful. I can't seem to find any better words for this piece of poetry.
It's about a teddy bear, yes, and it seems silly I call that beautiful; but damn, this was a wonderful piece of poetry.
I'm going to read it seven more times. No...maybe eight.

That really conveyed emotion well i hope youll read my stuff i think you would like it.5/5

Cory

Excellent!

Poor little teddy..well great flow and such ideas, i love your words..

keep it up!

Yeah, i liked the idea of the teddy bear having feelings, and all the memories.
It was really sweet, my friend
Love always,
Tara-Kay
x

Loved it! amazing poem.. keep it up! definitely a 5!
-C.P.-

Awww, It actually made me feel so sorry for the teddy bear and I imagined a teddy bear just sitting there for many years forgotten, It must suck. Anyway amazing poem lol It was very cute and deep...even for a teddy bear ^^ xxxxx Much love Roxy

This was beautiful...loved the mataphor used in this, very sweet and yet heartbreakingly sad at the same time.
Flow was okay, could be better in some places but for the most part it was okay.

W0W THiS iS G00D
Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
;]
-MiCHELLE
{5/5}
*(C0MMENT BACK)*

I love the idea behind this piece, .. it is so sad, and touching, --- but holds hope and smiles. Very nicely written. [:

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I really like this.
itz cute && sad at once.
5/5. :]]

Hey! wow! g-r-e-a-t poem! amazing! i love how u use the teddy bear too! never would of thought of that! u are an AMAZING writer! keep it up! h-u-g-s!!

Wow, another great poem by you. i really like this one cause this was the best.

again you have proved that you do deserve a 5/5 from me.

Damn this is good im a add this to my favorite poems keep it up

Well when I first read the title I had no idea what-so-ever on what to expect but for some reason this really touched me.People can look at this poem in so many different angels.It was very well written and very original.The flow was a little off in some places but other then that it was very good.I give you a 5/5

</3Amber

Wow I really enjoyed reading this.
I love that when your reading throughout the poem you actually feel compassion for him even if it's just a teddybear. At least that happend to me.
Sad but beautiful and quite unique, great write :)

5/5

xo angelique

Aww, I really loved this poem. You did a really good job on it. I guess that's how my Tiggers' feel right about now. Great job. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Oh my god! such a wonderful poem! So sad-yet happy cuz of memories........ wow... great job-5/5 it touched me so well-if my dad read this he'd think the same. i'll make a big deal out of the good stuff in life from now on ;D

~'*'~Skye~'*'~

This is soo cute and sad...i feel so bad for the poor teddy, seeing and feeling everything but never being able to tell anyone...aww i'm gonna start crying now...
beautiful, excellent and really emotive poem
awesome stuff!!!
5/5
- ali x x x x x x

I rele felt the emotion of the teddy bear lol and i rele liiked how it was written!!! good job!

Aww... wow! i'm so touched! this poem is beautiful! I love it! It is very well-written... so sad but wonderfully expressed... I loved how the title was Teddy Bear because that can be a special item to a person and I really loved the ending.. it was beautiful!