They see

by cory   Sep 15, 2007


I cannot take this much longer
I just wish i was stronger
So i can make it through the day
And not wonder if i may
But now i am appalled
By you and yours
And whats it called
I think you see my hate
I tried to hide but I'm irate
I thought u were my mate?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    This one i felt it was ment to get louder as u read on
    ~and it made feel like u r getting angry as u read on~

    perfect for what u r saying

    really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!!

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    WOW, that was GREAT!!! it was short, but REALLY GOOD!!!GOOD JOB!!! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Very very deep...it showed alot of emotion keep up the GREAT work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so hateful and sorrowful;you did a good job with this
    There were alot of lines that a lot of people can relate to

    Good job,
    Laura

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