A new life part 2.

by Jacqui Armstrong   Sep 15, 2007


From not know the reason why
i had to move and say goodbye
to all my friends the new and old
to leave them all i felt so cold

i felt so cold so deep inside
feeling alone; wanting a guide
holding on to all that i could
trying to be all that i should

then out from nowhere he appeared
the thought of love one thing i feared
but when we met something just clicked
so calm and simple who could predict

where we would be some weeks down the line
something somewhere just made him shine
he was like, the bright light for me
at the end of the tunnel; i could see

all the darkness faded away
all the sad thoughts wandered astray
all the confusion left me right then
everything became much clearer again

the reason that i moved away
has become so clear, i want to stay
me and him always and forever
he is my world and ill leave him never

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Little long... But interesting... I give you 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This poem is full of emotions and your word choice was great. the flow was flawless. and the imagery was fantastic. i dont really have a favorite stanza, but the ending was well put in. a great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Very well done in rhyming. I'm enjoy reading your peoms.

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    This seems as though it would fit in the love category, though I can see why you placed it here ... Anyhow. Swell poem. The flow was a bit rocky to me, but it oozed emotion, gratitude, and hope. Overall, a pleasure to read.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Hey. This seems like it should be in the love category.
    Anyway, great poem. Wonderfully written. I loved your choice of words. I think you should capitalize your "I's", it'll make the appearence of the poem much better. I really like topic of this poem. It flowed nicely as well and the rhyming wasn't forced at all.
    Good Job. 5/5

    Keep it up!

    -Shannon <3

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