I loved it! is was short but said a lot. good job! honestly.

mandy

Short can sometimes make it even more meaningful. and you showed tht here.
i luved it. i understand wht ur saying. and i absolutly love poems tht do tht. tht read my thoughts so perfectly.

Umm, it had a different vibe, but it was one of those poems that stick in ur head 4 a while because of its power in the words. good job.

.:Katelyn:.

I dont know what it is about this poem but i really like it. i love how your able to express yourself so deeply.

Simple :) but nice!

Wow this was short, but it said so much in just a few words! You did a great job! I enjoyed reading it! I also liked the rhyming in it! 5/5

~Kristina

VERY VERY GOOD!!

This is a very well written poem. Short, but like I've been saying very much emotion packed into a short piece. Keep it up.

+I finally got over that stupid writers block.
I wrote a new one.
I don't think it's as well as my other ones, but Im in school..and I've got to worry about getting caught or something..lol.

5/5..Keep it up Cory..You're amazing.

"Darkness
Surrounds the center of my being
Everything
Nothing is as it seems"

I got chills up my spine when i read the ending! What a great little piece!
Excellent
5/5
*Gem*

This was also so good! i just donno what to say...its just so beautiful. =p keep it up!

BabyGurl

Great poem i know how you feel

Great job.

I liked the simple straightforward style of this piece and the title certainly encourages you to think beyond the words. To my mind it seems that this poem could be a little longer as it feels there is more to be said yet it also seems to say enough.

So many meaningful words in so little place. Very enjoyful and powerful! An amazing write!
5/5 Keep it up!

This was awesome man!! =]

Short but very meaningful. Such a powerful expression of emotions displayed. 5/5, Em x