Can't He Stop Hurting

by Raychil   Sep 16, 2007


Can't he just stop hurting?
He's feeling so much pain
I can see it in his eyes,
It's driving him insane

I need him to feel better
I need him to live
Because if he was taken away
I simply could not forgive

God, he's my brother
He means the world to me
I can not live without him
God, please let him see

I know his life is bad right now
And there's nothing I can say
To make him smile one more time
And take the hurt away

I know it's not his fault
But he's dying inside
And I can not even count
All the tears I've cried

I can't stand to see him,
As what he has become
His eyes only hold sadness
From what has been done

Can't he just stop crying?
Can't he please just see?
Every time he's hurting
It's also hurting me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Powerful...great flow 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by megan

    Its almost like you wrote how i feel only its with my sister not brother but it was a really deep and touching poem... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sydney

    This is an extremely beautiful poem. Great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Beutiful and filled with emotion

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Mhairi

    Another gud one and on ur profile u say they're not gud... man ur way too modest :P
    it also shows the emotion that family and friends go through in times likke these which is a side that the person hurting really can't see.
    again, definitely 5/5

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