This is a wonderful nature poem. Autumn is my favorite season and I think you captured it and all it's beautifuly in this piece. Great imagery! 5/5

marcella

Gem

What a truley beautiful picture you have painted here. You make me want to go outside even though its freeeeeezing.....and a little rainy....pfft. But a wonderful write and the imagery was spot on. I loved it, i love these poems and they really make me appreciate all the beauty right under my nose. What an amazing write, i think its my favourite and im gonna go cause im rambling but terrific.
(5/5 - if could give it more i would lol)

Kelly
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Beautiful poem, it has wonderful rhythm and imagery is excellent. You described atmosphere of autumn greatly and this piece has some special incredible tone. Well done, I enjoyed in it.

Lovelovelove it. The imagery is so vivid that the reader can just picture all of the words you wrote, well, I could anyways ;) LOL. Great job Dear !

5.5
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This poem was very cute. it has a nice calming feeling to it. which i absolutly loved. made me smile. :-) good work dear

The whole feel of this piece is so relaxing and calm. Very serene....and QUIT SAYING MEH!!!lol! :) I mean seriously, you could recite the alphabet and you'd get 15 or 20 comments on it! Lol!!! You're work is incredible, Gem. You are a fantastic poet and I can't wait to read more! :)
~Midnight Sun

I love the feeling you get out of this one
5/5

I love nature poems, but I'm not any good at writing it. You, I must say, have a talent for them. Your description here is so well written, and the flow was well done, yet again. Well done on a great poem. :]

Tammie

The flow on your poems seem to be flawless always, I'm so jelous. The vocab was exellent. 6/5 :P xxx alex xxx

"The air is getting cold and crisp
Time to zip up jackets and coats"
- These two lines (as well as the 2 lines in the second stanza) are proof to me that people can pull of a good poem with a lot of 'and's' close together. Usually I can't stand that because it doesn't seem poetic. But sometimes, such as this time, people can pull it off.

One thing I noticed wrong with the poem, or wrong to me. Was that you said 'heading down south to the summer'. While that is correct, they are heading TO summer, I find it a bit more simple to say 'for the summer'. Of course that's a phrase used quite often and you may want your own 'phrase' here.

Good poem, Gem. You have exceptional talent.
As I'm sure you're well aware of.