Comments : A bird that flies no more

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This one had to go into my favorites list...
    it is really awesome...
    i love the ending, especially... it says everything...
    5/5
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan Doyle

    I really love this one. You did a great job rhyming, but keeping the meaning and the poem from being too cliche... great!

    -Danny

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    an excellent poem, you did a great job in making this one. the flow is good as well as the rhyming. my favorite stanza is the last one.
    keep up the good work5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by LiveTogetherDieAlone

    Hey i really liked this poem.. good rhyming an dloved the last stanza also.. good work done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    TRAPPED! ISOLATED! LOVED IT!!!! Again one great peice!

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem really enjoyed this 1