Comments : I am sorry...

  • 16 years ago

    by Tate LaBianca

    Sweet Jeebus I love you, girl..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    W0W THiS iS G00D
    Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
    ;]
    -MiCHELLE
    {5/5}
    *(C0MMENT BACK)*

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayanda Elena

    You have and excellent use of imagery. It's a beautiful poem, and it sounds as if it's really from the heart.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    This is a poet after my own heart. I love your style of writing here and enjoy it a lot. This really is my favorite type of poem where the poets heart and emotions flow so well from the poets pen. I could feel the winds of your heart breath in this poem and the pain as well. very nicely done.