I liked the flow and story behind this poem, however; I felt you could elaborate on the poem more by making it longer. I was just getting into the meaning and story of this as it came to a sudden halt. Overall great write, you have talent, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Although this is a sad poem, It is beautiful and heart warming. Deep Love even in Death,
cannot be denied.

and in Faith that loneliness
cannot penetrate a bond
like ours.

Excellent I thought. Peace and Blessings

Jeez. i really can't think of much to say about your poems. they are just to fabulous!!!