Knowing your okay

by cynthia   Sep 19, 2007


My Love
Are you alive
Are you still breathing
My mind is restless until I know
That you are safe and sound
I want to be able to hear it from you
Because then I know your safe
Just to hear you say that you're still alive
Helps my mind rest
I feel relieved
The pressure is off of my shoulders
Now, I can relax
Knowing your okay
I don't have to wonder if your safe or not
Because when you receive my letters
Tells me that you are still alive
Without you saying a word to me
Even though I may not hear it from you
I do know you love me
And that you are okay

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Yes, that is wonderful! you have made it more fullfilling and interesting, and by creating more moods and questions in it you have given it more tentio and answers and just developed the flow way better.
    FANTASTIC WORK!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    Nice poem i enjoyed it

    comment back :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    I agree completely with the first comment - I would have loved to hear more about your feeling of dread. Still a very good poem. it still warrants a 5 from me. Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I like this one very much as well. Lovely message and nice to show that you really care. I think this would be even better if you wrote a little more about the fears you hold, and things that remind you of the person...that would be really cool.

    But other wise nice.

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