Comments : Se acabo/Its over

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww, thats really good, it is good you can also wirte it in two languages. well done xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Well said

  • 10 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    K, I've loved all your poems but I think that was is my favorite and it's just...one of those that touched my heart ~_~ That was a fantastic writing job ^_^ A perfect 5 ~_~ The last four lines are my favorite though and I hope you know just how talented you are =)
    Rhea

  • 10 years ago

    by Alma

    Hay mucha verdad en este poema
    es muy lindo!
    5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Devon

    I love ur poem! vewry original ideas! (although i can speak much spanish) but anyways awesome poem, good cominations! 5/5 keep up the great work

  • 10 years ago

    by The Herald

    Nice...

    muy bein! mucho gusto! es un placer! lol, i only know a little "phrase spanish"

  • 9 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Wow i really felt the emotion in this....keep it up please!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Éste es un buen poema. Buen trabajo. Me encantó

  • 9 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Este es un buen poema. Buen trabajo. me encanta 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Poetess

    Me encantoooo! Y se como se siente todo eso. Que bueno que hay alguien que escriba poemas en espanol, ya no se ven poemas asi casi. Nunca dejes de escribir! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Melody

    Beautiful poem ! Loved it with whole my heart...especially in spanish , 5/5
    .......*Melody*.....

  • 9 years ago

    by Unamed

    Haha..ur gight its better in spanish ;)

    i loved it tho.
    i could feel ur remorse against him..

    nosotras mujeres necesitamos q ser fuertes ;)

    I loved it!!!
    5/5
    Aly

  • 9 years ago

    by angela cisneros

    I enjoyed this poem alott it reminded me of why i left the guy i did and that i am strong and could keep on going although i wasnt pregnant at the time i still felt tied up right now i with a great guy and i wouldnt be with him if i haden't broken up with the guy i did right at this moment i am 5 months and three weeks pregnan and i am really happy

  • 9 years ago

    by angela cisneros

    I enjoyed this poem alott it reminded me of why i left the guy i did and that i am strong and could keep on going although i wasnt pregnant at the time i still felt tied up right now i with a great guy and i wouldnt be with him if i haden't broken up with the guy i did right at this moment i am 5 months and three weeks pregnant and i am really happy

  • 8 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Wow your peoms leave me speechless...5/5