I really enjoyed this poem alot. The imagery you portrayed was so clear and eerie I loved the effect and also I loved how this piece made me feel so intense and on edge. Your word choice strong and powerful expecially for a dark poem and the flow was great didn't go off at all. Well done on writing such a great read. Keep up the good work. ~Mel

Thats awesome! I like it :)

I love this poem! *Favorites*