You have such a fine grasp of language GGP. I can't say enough good things about your writing.

I thought it was very good. It's an interesting poem. I'm not sure if it's a 4 or a 5. I think it's more of a 5. I usually like the rhyming poems better but you got away with it because of the words and story you told. Very well done.

Your flow was awesome! The imagery was perfect!
Overall an excellent poem! 5/5

Wow. what can i say, it was amazing.
the imagery that your words create
is simply amazing. i thought it was
great and you portrayed the point
beautifully. i prefer rhyming poems
but it was awesome. nicely done 5/5

nikki

Wow! i love the wording! A very unique write! It flowed very beautifully! Keep up the good work!

Very interesting to read something written from an utterly unique perspective. Highly imaginative.