Wow, this is really dark and twisted! love it! lol really enjoyed reading it, flowed so easily. wasnt cluttered or complicated :) great work! :)

Great! Leaves you wondering what the heck is going on... ;)

I think this was beatiful. It really gets thinking if it has really happen or not, and then end just made all clear. Nice flow and ryhmes, and i thought the imagery was amazing, I pictured it all. Nightmares are horribole when can't make differents from real and fake, and you expressed this all so greatly in this poem.
Very enjoyful read!
5/5

I loved reading this poem! amazing poem. it flowed really well.

I love all of ur poems keep writing plezz!! you r very good at it! this poem was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I still have to read your other two new poems... but so far, this is the best out of everything you've written, it was really clear and illustrative and the words were really effectively used

Ooooh. That was marvelous. I've had dreams like that. I've woken up in sweat with my hear pounding because I swear I had just killed someone. I loved the wording.

*Is just in love with your dark twisted poems*

Cayce xx

I've had dreams like this, which came after my ex had passed away. It's such a beautiful poem. The image in this was so powerful that made me believe I was in this nightmare. The rhyming and flow fit just right. Great job!
.:CiNdY:.