Puzzling Element

by Dark Demise   Sep 27, 2007


-----Puzzling Element-----

Questioning the authority,
Unique patterns to decode,
Travel the seven sea's willingly,
Ramped emotions that are growing cold,

Rest in peace in a deep trance,
Sleep until the end of time,
Frozen solitude is in the distance,
Isolation awaits us all like a crime,

Eerie feeling is in the mist
Live life fully, I insist,
Essential doings to scratch off the list,
Mental addictions that we must resist,
Earthy pleasures that are here to distract us,
Nothing but eternity above would be so righteous,
Time will only tell, if we are all going to hell,

The fire awaits us in the bottomless pit,
The air shoots up above, you better catch the current or you will emit
The earth shakes and we must all decide to sink or rise
The watter is coming in to wash us away, it's time to say you're goodbyes

These words mean nothing in by them selves
Scramble them up, and study them hard
Unlock the books in you're mind sitting on the shelves
Shuffle up the deck and see if you can pick the right card

Life will live on as an art, life will live on forever,
Take the puzzle apart, just to put it back together.

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  • 9 years ago

    by she

    Mental addictions that we must resist,
    Earthy pleasures that are here to distract us,
    Nothing but eternity above would be so righteous,
    Time will only tell, if we are all going to hell,
    -like this line the most,
    the whole poem was written so well, very well!

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This was amazing. And I really liked it. I like the idea of the poem too. :] This was unique and very interesting. The flow was amazing And the beginning really got my attention, and held. :] An enjoyable read. 5/5.

  • Now this poem absolutely took my breathe away. It was so deep. The imagery is so good and the flow fit just right. I think this is my favorite out of all your poems. Very good job. Don't ever stop writing!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 10 years ago

    by December

    This has to be one of the best poems i have read in a while...you have made get a diff. perspective on life and wut i should do wit mine..it was a beautiful poem!
    LOVED IT!!

  • 10 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    Powerful poem! beautifully written!

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