Comments : Intricacy Of Love (Etheree)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Bonnie dear

    Why is it that the
    Rose has to wilt
    Before it
    Learns to
    Grow?
    ^^^
    This ending makes one sit back and really think. Such a deep message within the words.

    Enveloped in a intricate cocoon
    ^^^
    I love this first line!
    As I love the Etheree form as well
    Well done dear heart ... well done
    Hugs
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautiful poem, it is filed with so many emotions and you expressed feelings amazingly. It is so sad and unique. Well done, you should be proud on this piece. You also created superb and very effective atmosphere with just few words. That is impressing, excellent job. It deserves more than 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This poem is truly deep and original, you picked great topic to write about and portrayed meaningful message in this powerful piece.
    You expressed the sadness excellently, yet your words contain a lot of beauty.
    I'm truly amazed with this brilliant poem.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Beautiful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Yay geee! u didn't tell mi u had a new poem!
    anywayz
    wat a beautiful poem
    ur a wonderful poet
    it was so lovely
    ily! ♥ Salvador

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Madison

    Your work is amazing, i9 love it

  • 11 years ago

    by dalllllal

    Loved this poem!