Oh my gosh, this is an amazing poem. It touched me like...in the DEEPEST part of my heart!! B/C THAT EXACTLY HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW ABOUT MY GUY!!!! {sigh} beautifully written, I'd give it a 10 if the rating went up that high :]

I stand corrected....I like this one even more!.....it is fantastic....I wish I wrote it!....It sums up everything I have been going through too....great job.

Wow amazing wirte
remind sme of the song,drops of jupiter by train
really inspired write
keep it up!:)
-Lisa

Omg!!! you know im a fan!!! wow.. probably you're best yet!! you are amazing.. i love this line
I am steady throwing pebbles to knock down a steel door.
As I scream and knock you answer no more.

awesome!!! wow girly!! you have serious talent.... keep it up!!

See our expierience with our ohhso cruel girls lol, they're so similar! 5/5 you know it!

Wow this poem is so good i can toatally relate!! Keep up the good work!! 5/5