Comments : A Thousand To Go

  • 16 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Aww this is really sad but a great joba t writing it i like the last stanzer very much .. hope it all works out

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Beautiful poem.
    well written. nice flow. :]]
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Another beautifully penned piece, i really enjoy reading your poems. They are so effortless to read. So much pain and anguish in so few lines.

    Beautiful sadness finds me in peace
    Crying the tears, I know will not cease.

    Wonderful way to start the poem.
    Job well done.