Depressions Trap

by kia   Sep 28, 2007


A room of hate
Inside a web of lies
A disgrace with no beginning
And no end in sight
A dark emptiness that sucks you in
It'll takes your life
Sucking away your soul
Don't try to run
There's no way to hide
It'll find you
And make you turn cold
No one to tell
They don't understand
Your pleas for help
Will remain unheard
No one will ever know
That your slipping away
Slowly everything you were
Will be stolen or led astray
It will take all your pleasure
And replace it with pain
Steal all your friends
And leave you all alone
No point in trying
The end is already here
Crying wont help you
It lives off your tears
The salty taste its fuel to keep chasing
Apologize until your blue
You'll never get through
It won't take your bribes
You wont get to see the light
It's over for you now
It just waits till you give in

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    All I have to say, beautiful free write.

    -Sam

    [5]

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    No point in trying
    The end is already here
    Crying wont help you
    It lives off your tears
    The salty taste its fuel to keep chasing
    Apologize until your blue
    You'll never get through
    It won't take your bribes
    You wont get to see the light
    It's over for you now
    It just waits till you give in

    this poem is sooo true!!! the part i copyed and pasteded? is soo my life i can relate to it... when someones depressed they feel they can never leave the world there in.. and people who arent depressed dont understand what we can see and hear.. i love your writting i wish i new a really high number to give you
    20000000/20000000

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Great poem, really well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Matthew Betts

    Sad :(