OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG how sad :(
Anyways the poem was really good (and sad) You got the rhyming and the rhythm right at place. keep up the good work.

plz comment some of my poems if u have time <3

That was good...I liked it...

Omg i love it now im scared lol my bf might have to go to war !!!!!!!! Omg my eyes got watery you pick great words

...heh, that was great work. Very well done and im not just saying that...that sent chills down my spine it was so good. I really liked that one. 10/5 (broken limit XD)

:Holds up bilboard that say s" asomeness poem!!":

that was great ^^

THAT WAS GREAT ITS HOME FOR ME MY DADS GOING TO IRQ SATURDAY. AND IF YOU WONT MIND ID LOVE IF YOUD CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS AND COMMENT

WOW! GREAT POEM!

Aww man this sucks. It always does when you lose a hero. I hate watching the news seeing another person in Iraq die. Yep but ya know that's something we all have to deal with. Well written poem.
-vino

This is a piece of art.

Interesting!!!..the poem was more than amazin..I did like it so much..keep it up5/5

Loved it.
--aprils conspiracy