Comments : Tears of pink

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a unique and descrptive poem i loved the very first stanza

    In the deep depths of the sea
    Green clouds forming a brace
    Smiles a girl with carved eyes
    Blood plastered on her face

    i really loved the read 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 11 years ago

    by Keath

    Thank you, and I will do so. (:

  • 11 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Wow.. your words just caught me speechless. a unique and a very vivid work. i love this lines.. this lines says a lot ( a very deep meaning)

    "Black riddles stay unspoken
    Your words hurt more than mine

    Crystals fallen out of the sky
    Tracing paths on our ground
    A bird dropped the letter long ago
    Back to the origins of sound"

    interesting poem.. keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this was really great poem, written greatly. i really loved your word choice, it was amazing..... keep it up
    a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it.

  • 11 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is very strongly written. i loved it alot. it kept my attention through the whole thing. my fave lines were

    When love is making false appearances
    And lies seem to be true
    Then kiss my red contains for ever
    Only the blackness belongs to you

    keep it up. i loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley

    Very different. but enjoyable to read.

    In the deep depths of the sea
    Green clouds forming a brace
    Smiles a girl with carved eyes
    Blood plastered on her face..

    i loved this part it kinda made me feel all chilly and for just words to do that it has to be really strong..keep it up u are very good. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "In the deep depths of the sea
    Green clouds forming a brace
    Smiles a girl with carved eyes
    Blood plastered on her face"

    These lines were dark and deep, but the entire poem was fabulous. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I love this piece! It contains so vivid imagery weaved with superb choice of words and excellent descriptions. Great poem from the beginning to the end, with powerful and captivating atmosphere and fantastically expressed emotions.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Given notice of a spell
    Though the fingers won't entwine
    Black riddles stay unspoken
    Your words hurt more than mine-

    Keep up, you have great talent!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is very great poem, I really amazed with your flow and word picking. It's so sentimental. Also the story is great too, 5/5 without a doubt!!!