This was a nice sentemental poem almost whimsical at heart done very lovingly and well Plot121

I like the repitition and its a good quality in this poem. The best rhymes took 5/5 from me for this piece. and thanx for the nice comments on my work and the suggestion to my friend :)

Tc
Fsams

Very beautiful poem! An enjoyable read...loved it! keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

Wow I really like your style its soo cool the way you express yourself poetry isnt all the same its only that way if you dont write exactly what your feeling I get really emotional in my poems it gets out all my feeling without hurting anyone or myself I love Poetry it saved my life
Bridgette

Really liked the song. The structure and flow were good, and the rhymes to. Don't have anything bad to say about it 5/5

Ya that is a gr8 love poem
found you on the discussion board
5/5 for the poem

well the way you divided and express its definitely commendable

take care
and yeah comment on any of my poems as you said in your post
tx

I loved this ! It was short, sweet, and to the point. I loved the style you used and the rhymes didnt seem forced which made it flow beautifully. The meaning behind it was strong a reassuring. A cute love poem! *5/5*

Short and sweet and to the point, I loved the repetition of Amore very nicely done - good word choice and the flow was great as well 5/5 GG23

Btw i speak french and love in french is spelt amour not amor... sorry if i'm being a little perfectionnest

The flow of this poem is excellent, it makes it so easy to read, it weaps with emotion and love.

Well done

Gary.

5/5

I really like it. It's simple, which is good. It reminds me of that kid's lullaby... "mamma's gonna buy you a mocking bird"

Cute...short but cute.
Very well done on this.
Try and make each line
that is in the small stanzas
rhyme..it will help with the
flow. 5/5
1/5<-Poems i've commented
<3Tay

Awww beautiful poem
i loved reading it!!
i smiled lol
beautiful poem!!
5/5

Aww that is so sweet! I really liked the last part

Amor, I'll give you the key to my heart,
That we may lock and never depart.

I loved this poem 5/5

Aww that is so sweet! I really liked the last part

Amor, I'll give you the key to my heart,
That we may lock and never depart.

I loved this poem 5/5

BABY, I'VE NEVER READ THIS ONE BEFORE. IT'S REALLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKE THE
"I'LL GIVE YOU THE KISS
THAT WILL GRANT YOUR EVERY WISH"

I LOVE IT BABY!

BY THE WAY, JUNIOR'S AWAKE RIGHT NOW!