Ghost

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Sep 30, 2007


Oblivious; ignorance surrounded by beauty,
No emotion not a heartbeat its gone.
Far to deep in fantasy to face reality,
Given up on fighting for what she wants.

Pale face is dead; body not allowing tears,
Traumatized constantly by unexpected actions.
Drowning in her own blood. Choking on nothing but air.
From emotions no reactions.

Up and down like a yo yo, on and of like a bulb of light,
Brightness then darkness no time to take it in,
Boiled to a point anger has vanished,
Blood steam cold, body frail and thin.

Invisible, unimportant lost in another realm,
Shes dead, a ghost girl powerless under his spell.
Love has killed her and hes now a monster
Picking her weaknesses, laughing as she fell.

Twisted in a vortex of painful love,
Cant escape to late, shes down
Caught in the web of the spider,
This frail fly has had its time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The description in this poem was done quite well the images were great but the core message seemed a bit hazy other then that a good read Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Tami

    Your awesome

    i love this poem its crazy how you can see everything going down your use of words are amazing

    you rock =]]

    Tami

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I absolutely loved this poem definately 5.5 for me
    such a cretive and abstract image.
    i wish more poems were of this quality.

  • Great poem!!! I really liked it...

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Interesting choice to place this one in the love category...its true, love can almost destroy us, whether it be for better or for worse, and you did an excellent job portaying that, great job!

    andrew