I can relate to a lot of this. I liked it.

Wow.. started out great i thought it waz gonna be a nice story wit a good ending.. but wow.. anyway it waz great although i DID lose my spot once. lol great poem sumthin that A LOT of ppl can relate to including myself 5/5

Great poem, well written.. 5/5

This displays wonderful sentiment and is absoluetly cram packed with emotion.

I am always wary like this as its one big block of text. I think it makes it soo much more daunting to the reader. I think that if yuo broke this down into stanza's it would be alot easier on the eye, and therefore more appealing to the masses.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not taking anything away from this poem .. it is a very nice read.

Full of such wonderful feelings, written directly from the heart.

A solid [4/5]
With structure would be a definite [5/5]
~Pete.

This was a good piece but the structure of block paragraph was almost daunting. I liked the flow the work and the descriptions was well done but it seems to be broken into a more stuctured format Plot121

I will not say that the content in this work is bad. Its good but very difficult for the mind to read with a good impression. I would immediately suggest you to structure it well :)

Tc
Fsams

Wow that was long but it was worth it that is so good I wish I could write and have my poems come out as good as yours
Bridgette

So true that our first impressions are not always what we think they are, but you always gain knowledge from a relationship no matter what. Excelelnt job with this piece, definately from the heart 5/5 GG23

Thanks for commenting my poems once again it was greatly appreciated

ANOTHER POEM U WROTE FOR HIM >:-[

I like it mucho