Angel

by jLegendc   Oct 1, 2007


As I look into the skies,
I see an angel in disguise,
She looked straight at me
With those beautiful eyes.
Just by that split second,
She removed my demise,
Gave me hope to realize
That there's still a meaning
For the life I fantasize...

As she looked
At me deep inside,
She saw a name printed,
There are letters that collide.
It forms a word that will,
Always be by my side
I'll protect it with,
All of my might
Even if it costs my life...

As she looked
Into my mind,
She saw an image
That can't be unbound.
It's as if my mind,
Is always on a rewind,
There's no other image
She'll ever find...

A she touched
My hand & pull me near,
I confessed my love
Without any fear.
The world became so clear,
And as I put her hand
On my chest --
I asked her...
"Can you hear my heart beat?"
It is saying that I'll love you
With every beat of it!!!!!"

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    As I look into the skies,
    I see an angel in disguise,-buetiful

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Very great and descriptive poem!
    Although I did not like how you started the poem, and stanzas with the word "And".
    for some reason that bugged me.

    also,
    "She saw an image
    That can't be unbind."
    that is not correct use of grammar
    if it was to be said like that it would be
    "She saw an image
    That can't be unbound"

    but since that does not rhyme with the poem,
    you would have to change it to
    "She saw an image
    That cannot unbind."

    just how i see it.

    5/5 amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Your words! thier so sweet! and like whoa! lol gahh! your amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    THIS A VER SWEET POEM.....NICE JOB!!!!

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