Comments : Angel

  • THIS A VER SWEET POEM.....NICE JOB!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Your words! thier so sweet! and like whoa! lol gahh! your amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Very great and descriptive poem!
    Although I did not like how you started the poem, and stanzas with the word "And".
    for some reason that bugged me.

    also,
    "She saw an image
    That can't be unbind."
    that is not correct use of grammar
    if it was to be said like that it would be
    "She saw an image
    That can't be unbound"

    but since that does not rhyme with the poem,
    you would have to change it to
    "She saw an image
    That cannot unbind."

    just how i see it.

    5/5 amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    As I look into the skies,
    I see an angel in disguise,-buetiful