Comments : Missing piece

  • 16 years ago

    by The Only Mistake

    Hey there,

    Love your poem! Good work as usual!

    (Spreek je later ;-))

  • 16 years ago

    by IMissYou

    I love this poem it's really good reminds me of things I need to forget but I find it hard!!! Anyway I just wanted to say great work..Stace..x

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrie

    You left a note asking ppl to read your poem as most do but something about yours made me think it was worth the time and you proved me write. Your writing is truly a gift and you should be proud. There is one sentance in your poem that i dont disagree with but i dont agree either you said that the memories will wash away but they dont have to. you shouldn't erase the memories you should just remember that there is a place you can tuck them away and move on. "cherish but never regret"

  • 16 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Great job! in regards to ur comment on my one poem cuts, i dont cut anymore i havent for a year, the blade i used is stabbed in my future boyfriends wall in his bedroom! he likes it there cuz he knows i dont use anyone blade but that one. so yeah thanks for caring though! great job keep it up!
    amanda

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wow.. awesome job!!! i love it alot, i love the way you talked about the puzzle piece.. !! it works really well with this! keep up the good work! can't wait to read more of your work!!! AWESOME JOB! =0)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    This is really good =]

  • 16 years ago

    by simplyshay

    You are truely an amazing writer. You capture the emotion in each one of your poems. I saw your quote asking people to read your poems, and it was deffinatly worth it! Keep up the good work!

    _____________________xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by TooLittleTooLate..♥

    I guess these wounds will never fully heal

    ^^^
    100% relatable
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Really nice poem.
    Very emotional,,
    It must hurt when someting like that happens.. hope 2008 will be a better year.
    Take care!

  • 15 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    Very powerfull.
    Very Nice!