Comments : Do as I do.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    It's really cool how you found a way to make it, in the end, to not do all those things. Really cool way to do that

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Good write...
    I could feel a lot of hate and anguish in each stanza...
    "Most importantly of all.
    Never listen to what I say.
    I'm always the one in the wrong."

    ^^ well this was unexpected... I liked it...

    keep writing..